Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this hectic life, we are surrounded by many tasks that should do in limited time. Everybody has own habit to do his/her work. Some people used to hurry to do their tasks while others spend a lot of time working on their project. Definitely, some people if asked would agree it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistake however, others have a negative attitude. As I am concerned, I believe that we must do our work in a hurry. In the following paragraphs, I will shed light on arguments to support my views.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that working quickly help us save our time for our other duties. If you do your work as fast as you can, you would have extra time that is very useful for doing other tasks. To illustrate this point let’s consider the following paragraph. When one’s works in a company, he usually many tasks to do, if he tends to accomplish his work slowly, without in doubt, he would face with a shortage of time and in the end, many of his tasks remain incomplete. In contrast, one’s who work quickly will have more time, even he makes a mistake, he could back and eliminate his fault.
Another reason that deserves some words is that working in a hurry assists our success in the workplace. In my opinion, working quickly is a significant skill that is necessary for employees to learn. They should not worry about the increase in the risk of mistake, over time, the rate of errors decrease considerably they learn to perform their work faster and accurate. This skills surely affect their position in the workplace because the manager finds out this hard worker deserves to get a promotion. And with new responsibility, he has to be able to do several tasks together. With working slowly, he would not fulfillment.
By way of conclusion, base on the arguments explored above, I am of the opinion that we should require to do our task in hurry in order to save more time to fulfill our other task and with the improvement the working quickly and reduce our errors we would more successful in the workplace.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 372, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...perform their work faster and accurate. This skills surely affect their position in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, while, as to, in contrast, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61021505376 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55060217465 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6231219131 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2777777778 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28105697342 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960977138657 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551011343615 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176893875308 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587231639092 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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