Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is true that museums are attractive places for not only locals but also tourists. While education is a meaningful purpose for museum’s role, I would argue that such places play a pivotal part in entertainment as well.
On the one hand, many people assume that museums should be connected essentially with the benefits of education. Firstly, old relics displayed may be for more valuable than our imagination. In fact, they possess a strong sense of identities and cultures that provide s knowledge about our roots. Secondly, if museums become enjoyable places they may lose their missions to teach people about local history. Additionally, those who come there for researching could be distracted by amusements and noises.
On the other hand, I believe that entertaining functions could be also suitable with museums. First, they are tourist attraction so they need to be refreshed in various ways in order to appeal more and more visitor attention. By emphasizing on enjoyment rather than offering too much educational content, as a result, museums can attain its aims easily. Furthermore, Instead of exhibiting antique collections, some museums are designed to display interesting objects creatively in science as well as advanced technology field. Actually, interactive activities or even games are organized as a part of exhibitions.
In conclusion, although there are different view towards the role of museums, it seems to me that museums can and should be both entertaining and educational so that people can experience enjoyment and learn new things in the same time.
- You miss a flight due to a problem at airport.Write a letter to the airline. In your letter+ describe what happened that caused you miss the flight.+ explain how missing your flight affected you.+ make it clear what you would like the airline do. 81
- Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34661354582 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97706347564 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657370517928 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8854453545 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.230769231 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2307692308 7.06120827912 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298671649531 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922588643567 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688162236162 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176838741762 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254461808495 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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