The state of the enviroment is now a cause for concern in all countries across the world. Apart from government measures ad policies, what can individuals do on a personal level to combat the negative effects that our lifestyles have on the enviroment?
Nowadays, due to modernization, a sudden increase in environmental degradation is noted. All the countries, more or less are facing this ever-increasing problem. Along with government policies, it is the duty of one to stand and fight for mother earth.
To begin with, a plethora of agreements are signed between various nations but a little is done for it. so it becomes more important of an individual to take part. For instance, to produce electricity a lot of fossil fuels are burnt out, so by minimizing the use of it may add a positive aspect to it. Moreover, air conditioners emit CFC which is harmful to the ozone layer. A collaborative step is needed against this. In addition, state transportation should be preferred more than private individuals. To exemplify, while traveling to the office or any other public place, a common mode of transport should opt in order to decrease traffic congestion which would eventually lead to less emission of toxic gases.
To add, instead of just focusing on prevention, a step is essential towards depletion as well. More trees should be planted. A rule should be made in the community to plant at least 10 flora or fauna in a week. Finally, the use of crackers should be prohibited by one so as to help the environment to sustain itself. For example, I myself refrain from fireworks because india is one of the most contaminated kingdoms in the world. As published by the UN, the top 8 states are from india in the list of maximum polluted ones.
To Conclude, a step in unison should be opted in all parts of the world in order to promote a healthy environment and all should stand tall against the mess which we have made otherwise, indeed, it would be difficult of the human race to survive.
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- It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? 89
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- The state of the enviroment is now a cause for concern in all countries across the world Apart from government measures ad policies what can individuals do on a personal level to combat the negative effects that our lifestyles have on the enviroment 75
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 194, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'fauna' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'faunae', 'faunas'.
Suggestion: faunae; faunas
...community to plant at least 10 flora or fauna in a week. Finally, the use of crackers...
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Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...of crackers should be prohibited by one so as to help the environment to sustain itself....
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, as to, at least, for example, for instance, in addition, more or less, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72459016393 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89116382655 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603278688525 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.565859169 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7647058824 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9411764706 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88235294118 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0889177875063 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0260354018205 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0302635019445 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.056605506898 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0124592429404 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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