Students in our school or university learn more from classes of teachers than other resources(eg internet or TV),do you agree or disagree？
Education has remained one of the most important aspects of humanity. Nowadays, with the advent of technology, some of the students are running after other resources such as the internet, TV for knowledge, however, I personally believe that the guidance provided by the teachers is one of its kind and it will ultimately help an individual to grow in all dimensions of life. but these sources may prove vital to some so as to cross check the knowledge but it should not be relied upon.
To begin with, there are many compelling reasons to include teaching methods from the internet nevertheless, it may prove to be detrimental to one's understanding as it contains content from different people which may be correct or not. In addition to this, the sources from which this information is being published is not trustworthy and eventually leads to disasters in real life.
On the other hand, teachers who impart their knowledge and experience can never be replaced. As these professors are qualified from reputed institutes and have tons of practice which cannot be learned from any other origin. To add to this, people who taught students to have themselves gone through the procedure to complete studies which can be benefited by the pupil wherever they fave difficulties in any region of their schooling.
To sum up, I strongly believe that the level a teacher can raise no one else can do it perfectly. On the other hand, though the internet and other methods may provide a better understanding but the experience a teacher has is incomparable which eventually helps in the overall development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, as to, in addition, such as, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99253731343 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84504587529 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578358208955 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.8988011182 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.8 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16406436185 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062690032421 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476657475618 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993973829992 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227637551594 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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