The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors who satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The given table and pie chart illustrate the number of people visiting to Ashdown Museum during the periods before and after reconstruction and the rate of satisfaction of these individuals during the same years.
Overall, it can be clear that after the museum was refurbished, the number of visitors rose significantly and more positive feedbacks were surveyed.
Before reconstructed, Ashdown Museum received 15 percentage of very satisfied feedback while the number in the year after refurbishment was about 2.5 times much more than that. In addition, the percentage of people satisfying about the museum during the period after renovation slightly grew which was 40% in comparison with that in the period before reconstruction that was 30%. More importantly, the museum witnessed dramatic decrease in the rate of dissatisfied feedback from visitors after renovated, from 40% to 15%. There was a modest reduction in the number of very dissatisfied comments after refurbishment which was from 10% to 5%. The proportion of no response feedback still accounted for the minority of the total one, about 5%.
- The plans below show the layout of an university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. 61
- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now and the plans for its developments. Summarise the information 78
- The plans below show the layout of an university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. 73
- Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.Discuss both these views a 73
- The maps 11
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38505747126 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00860284991 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534482758621 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9719941308 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.857142857 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8571428571 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31175851948 0.215688989381 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140380988043 0.103423049105 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818339844993 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222096787985 0.15604864568 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358113705343 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.2329268293 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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