The charts below show the percentage of water used for the different purposes in six areas of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The charts below show the percentage of water used for the different purposes in six areas of the world.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by azxx on Tue, 03/19/2019 - 10:53

The bar charts compare the proportion of water usage in six different parts of the world by industrial, agricultural and domestic sectors.
Overall, it can be seen that while North America and Europe use water predominantly for industrial purposes, other four regions use it mainly for agriculture
In the North America main user of water was industrial sector, which accounted for 48% while South America spend five time less on it. In South and North America usage of water for domestic purposes was 13% and 19% respectively and for agriculture South America spend approximately 2 times more that North America which comprised of 71%. Industrial sector in Europe consumed 53% of water while domestic sector uses about three times less and 32% of water is spent on agriculture.
In contrast, the remaining three areas use much more water for agriculture. The highest is Central Asia at 88%, Africa at 84% and South East Asia at 81%. All these areas spend less than 10% on domestic and industrial purposes and the only exception is South East Asia’s industrial sector which spend 12%.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 315, Rule ID: WHICH_COMPRISED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'which comprised' or 'which consisted of' or 'which was composed of'?
Suggestion: which comprised; which consisted of; which was composed of
...imately 2 times more that North America which comprised of 71%. Industrial sector in Europe consum...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04972375691 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66447311672 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519337016575 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.9180278057 43.030603864 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.571428571 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8571428571 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177324862489 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946891505701 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581885579341 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127461306526 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336277829471 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 11.4329268293 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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