Some say that people working in different job roles should get different amounts of holiday time. Do you agree or disagree?
With the development of industrialization, people tend to have more chances to enjoy holidays in the current society, and it is likely believed by masses that people should have a different amount of leisure time according to their job. Personally, I entirely agree with that given statement for the following reasons.
Firstly and unavoidably, some appointments requiring a high level of responsibility and more physically or mentally demanding than others like teaching or working in a mine, to a certain degree, deserve more time off. The fact that they often spend much more time on working also means they have fewer chance to hang out with their friends or take care of their family members; therefore, longer vacation could help them relax and improve their working efficiency. However, some kind of jobs such as police officer and doctors, although demanding, still cannot have too many holidays. For example, a police officer cannot afford to have too many holidays because if they do not report to duty, the law and order situation will go out of control. Doctors and nurses also cannot have too much leisure time because their service is crucial for keeping society healthy. Especially, people work in such area need to stand by for urgent cases even their own holidays. Obviously, the amount of holiday time depends so much on by the nature of the job.
Advocates of this idea argue that the different amounts of holiday time is unfair, especially with some tiring jobs but have fewer holidays time such as police officer or doctors. However, these kinds of special jobs like that often have a higher salary than others in order to repay twice or three times when they are working overtime or sacrifice their personal time. I accept that there is still unfairness between different appointments , but it also should be noted that there is no complete equality exist in the world, so we have to learn to take it or leave it.
For the aforementioned discussions, it is clear that the number of holidays should depend on the type of jobs because the intensity and requirement of jobs vary from one to another.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, still, therefore, for example, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93036211699 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5951997473 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537604456825 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.0917470382 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.153846154 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6153846154 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279746056352 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105690095912 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075087393747 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186257476537 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553748444285 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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