Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities.
Many people belive that, we ought to pay more attention towards our healthcare and to enhance it by using as much as possible varieties of sport activities.However, others oppose this view.
This essay will take a closer view at the matters,showing my opinion and giving fair reasons to support it.
On the one hand it is true that, there are factors leading the people to take more care about their health habits.
Firstly, humanity’s healthcare it always have been one of the major priorities of the human kind and will continue to be.To keep it the governments should take some actions and these actions are , for example: one of the key would be creating a variety of different sports facilities the parks, in that way the members of society could use them while they are walking in the park.
Secondly, the institutions should care about the health of the human kind they have to encourage them by making advertisements showing different kinds of port activities and equipment by selling them on cheap prices to be accessable for the all members of society.
Third reason why we have to keep us fit and healthy.If people lose interest ,in their health habits these could lead to number of factors, for example: people could start suffer of obesity and that could lead to decreasing of well fit people.
In addition, although people could overtly there always will be different opportunities to fight it.
In conclusion ,despite all we have to care about our health by keep it in good condition using as much as possible any variety of sport facilities.
- The line graph illustrates the proportion of population aged 65 over between 1940-2040 in a period of 100 years in three different countries.They are: USA, Sweden and Japan 73
- Universitiesshould accept equal number of female and male students in every subject 56
- The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. 67
- In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing school and starting university studies. 56
- the charts below show the main reasons for study support by their employers. 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92134831461 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74671475935 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546816479401 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.6214574221 49.4020404114 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.25 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.375 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.25 7.06120827912 216% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141535760946 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610678553886 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344774035143 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0610678553886 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344774035143 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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