In some countries, marriages are arranged by the parents but in the other cases people choose their own marriage partner. Use your own ideas, knowledge and support your arguments with example and relevant evidence. Discuss both of them.
Wenlock is an important part of course because it is a life-changing event. Some tend to believe that parents should be responsible for their offspring wedding while others are on the side that an individual is free to choose his/her life partner. A concise decision of both is necessary as it will provide a broad view.
To begin with, what will happen if origins are involved in their child's matrimony! Firstly, freedom to choose freely would be eliminated thus leading to divorce in later years of life. Secondly, compatibility is one of the main reasons which bridge the gap between two people so, this element might not be there if marriages are arranged. Finally, on a positive belief, an experience of a father would not be wrong as he has seen the world so it might get you, right companion.
On the other hand, there are a plethora of merits than the other side of the coin. Human beings adjust themselves according to the situations so it is very relatable to this case. For instance, people dating since college know each other cons and pros and can adapt accordingly. Moreover, for a person, if included in disputes with her/his mate then would try to solve it as it is her/his choice, not anyone else's and no one is to be blamed for.
To conclude, being an essential selection of life it is better to find by yourself along with that parent's approval is also must thus not affecting the latter years of life. In the end, it is advised to focus more on one's choice.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, for instance, of course, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1218.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59622641509 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51268054988 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618867924528 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.766911764 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115404842158 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0393555265646 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345401560518 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0669649123673 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240920695521 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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