Task2:
Today more people are travelling than ever before.Why is this the case?What are the benefits of travelling for the traveler?
Nowadays, travelling essential due to globalization and industrialization. People are travelling for various reasons and it is necessary in today’s competitive world. There are also some advantages due to travelling.
People used to travel for business, work, education, tourism, pilgrimage, medical treatment, sports, etc. In business, to delicate with other company, delicates needs travelling to meeting corresponding officials. For work, employee used to travel for long distance to work. Some employees go for offshore to work in client place in order to get requirement and solve the technical issues. To study in best university, students travel and stay in nearest place of the university. Devotees visit holy places to get blessing from god. For example, Hindu devotees in India visit holy places of kasi to Rameswaram as pilgrim for once in their lifetime. To take best medical treatment people used to travel for long distant hospitals. Sportsperson need to travel abroad to participate in the international sport events. Some people travel for awareness program to spread awareness about effects of HIV (Human Immunodeficiency Virus), discipline, drugs, smoking, drunk and drive, tobacco and cancer.
Tourism helps to meet new people and share culture and custom. People can learn different languages and teach their language to the non-speakers. It helps to be fit and travelers can enjoy different types of food according to the place and weather. Moreover, they will get new friends and gain networking skills. It makes them confident and motivation to be a good human being.
To conclude, travelling helps in various ways to human society. It is unavoidable, as people have to travel for a purpose to complete their engagement and it satisfies their needs. It gives inspiration and dedication by watching long distance travelers as they have to face hardships to reach their goal.
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