You and your family have just rented an apartment and one or two problems occurred. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter
• introduce yourself
• describe the problems
• what you would like him/her to do.
Dear Sir/Madam,
Recently, I have rented an apartment from you for a period of six months. I am working as an Engineer in a software company and do prepare for myself for next day official assignments at home also which requires polite environment in the house.
As you know the weather of city is very hot and it is impossible to live without air conditioning because rooms get suffocated due to high temperature. Moreover, floor tiles of the kitchen and bathrooms are slippery and its too much difficult to walk on these floors without slippers. Last week my wife slipped in the bathroom and got fracture in the right foot.
As you probably know that window ac not lower down temperature so please install new split ac into the bedro om. Similarly change the floor tiles of both kitchen and bathroom because it creates hurdles for smooth walking.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,
Mandeep kaur.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, Recently, I have rented an apartment fro...
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Line 2, column 246, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...quires polite environment in the house. As you know the weather of city is very ...
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Line 3, column 364, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oom and got fracture in the right foot. As you probably know that window ac not ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nd got fracture in the right foot. As you probably know that window ac not lo...
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Line 5, column 114, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
...install new split ac into the bedro om. Similarly change the floor tiles of both kitchen ...
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Line 5, column 223, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... it creates hurdles for smooth walking. I am looking forward to hearing from you...
^^^^
Line 6, column 48, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Sincerely, Mandeep kaur.
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Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aring from you soon. Yours Sincerely, Mandeep kaur.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, similarly, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 777.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82608695652 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60320332799 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.726708074534 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2600519968 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3333333333 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 4.34317383033 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116771533602 0.216113520407 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483890648309 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490836488579 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0603847796077 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369553619082 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.