How widely of you think the problem spreads that people spend too much time on work than their personal life and experience time shortage? what problem will it cause?
These days, a multitude of critical issue are being debated all over the globe, a massive upsurge in the person spend too much time on work and they have less time to enjoy with family is the most controversial one. I will explain key point of my stance with the help of supportive arguments and instance.
To begin with, i can offer a variety of argument to support my point of view. Foremost among this, due to busy life every one struggle to develop their carer and well settled in their life. In this developing world all people run towards better living standard to fulfill their basic need they have to work hard to gain money. Money is most important factor which bring happiness and fulfill all our demand and need.
Another pivotal aspect of my point of view is that people often fail to understand they also spend some time with their family is golden memories of happiness. Family is one of most important part of our life. In some case we are failed to give some time to our family in that case family member also don't care about you.
Finally, after taking aforementioned point of view from my personal prospective i am inclined to believed that work ans family both is very important aspect of our life so we can manage time for both and this is most talked topic in recent days.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, so, well, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 1207.87684729 88% => OK
No of words: 236.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49576271186 5.00649968141 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23302672614 2.71678728327 82% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580508474576 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9448046905 50.4703680194 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.1 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.25397266985 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185970496813 0.242375264174 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700722389838 0.0925447433944 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055104034361 0.071462118173 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115754510697 0.151781067708 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361422984043 0.0609392437508 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 11.5310837438 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 55.0591133005 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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