The historical building in your place is located in the heart of the city. Write to the local government
-Why is the building important?
-What is its present condition?
-What action must be taken?
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to draw your attention on the poor condition of one of ancient monument in our city.
Our town is having one of the oldest temple, which was build during the golden age by one of the ancient king. As you know this place hold great religious belief and have numerous devotees. Its wall and old building material clearly displaying the old architecture, which is unique in its own way.
However, seeing its broken walls and damaged entrance area makes me feel extremely bad. I thought to get it repaired by collecting the money from the local people, but due to some dispute on reconstructing the path to entry nobody is ready to help. Ultimately, I was forced to write you and ask for the help.
I request you to please provide the funds from the current years budget and help in carrying the renovation work. This temple is extremely popular among the people of all the age group. Apart from this, temple is located in the heart of the city and reconstructing it will make the ambiance more beautiful.
Hope to get the positive response for your end.
Your's faithfully,
Maninder Vadhrah
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-04-01 | vadhrahmanjit@gmail.com | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 73, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and damaged entrance area makes me feel extremely bad. I thought to get it repai...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, apart from, as for, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75376884422 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4873610465 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64824120603 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5337998681 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8333333333 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5833333333 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144107096473 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449044916678 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033299869649 0.0603063233224 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0693842660289 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363207352683 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.