During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurant.
Write a letter to this businessman. In Your letter
Remind him when and where you met
Tell him what kind of job you are interested in
Say why you think you would be suitable for the job.
Dear Mr. Sam,
My name is Jitender singh and i am writing this letter to you regarding the Job availability in one of your restaurant.
Do you remember me? We have been travelled in same flight last Monday from Delhi to Chandigarh and I sat next to you. We have talked about each other’s profession and you told me that you own several restaurants in Delhi and across the country. Also I have discussed about my current with job for which I have travel regularly to Delhi. I have family a small family living in Chandigarh and In May I blessed with a baby girl.
You have told me that I should get in touch with you for a possible job in yours Chandigarh restaurant. As it is very difficult for me to visit Delhi frequently so I am looking for Job change in Chandigarh only. I have experience in admin department of two companies.. So can i have a job in your restaurant in admin department.
I have done Master of Business administration in 2013 and have rich experience of handling office work of four years. My resume is attached herewith this letter.
Hope to receive positive response from your side.
Yours sincerely
Jitender Singh
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
.... Sam, My name is Jitender singh and i am writing this letter to you regarding...
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Line 5, column 251, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...urants in Delhi and across the country. Also I have discussed about my current with ...
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Line 7, column 267, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...nce in admin department of two companies.. So can i have a job in your restaurant ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66504854369 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76895263408 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563106796117 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 303.3 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1578878966 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.6428571429 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7142857143 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217177877645 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823758631148 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806453283183 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11946398882 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758716957802 0.0580467560999 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.