the charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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the charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

the charts given compares the performance of water used in various kinds of regions such as North America, South America, Europe, Africa, Central Asia, and South East Asia. Overall, it is proved that central Asia was the biggest proportion of used water for agricultural use. while it is shown that industrial use is quite high in North America and Europe.
An analysis of the percentages by agricultural use, it is clear that four of six areas of the world used water for agricultural systems, it reaches more than a four-fifths in Africa, Central Asia, and South East Asia. Meanwhile, in South America agricultural use rate around 71%.
in contrast, it can be seen that half of the water needs in North America and Europe is an industrial use. However, agricultural use and domestic use is so minimally in both of these areas. in addition, domestic use is the minority use for all around areas, it is merely under a fifth.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while, in addition, in contrast, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 767.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79375 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6533513596 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4088491568 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.875 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171184211167 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853636341116 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446853380777 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128780674612 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210252142319 0.0819641961636 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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