Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is true that some people argue that being a university graduate is the key to guarantee a good job. While there are others who think that it is better to have experience and soft skills, I believe that having university education is more essential.
On the one hand, having some valuable occupation experience and other soft skills is beneficial in many ways. Firstly, experienced candidates who show their abilities and qualifications are often appreciated, as they can step into a position without further training and be of immediate benefit to the company. As a result, it could help to save a lot of time and money. Secondly, soft skills also make the resume more impressive in some specific jobs. For example, some skills such as persuasive abilities and communication skills are crucial to sales success.
On the other hand, there is a variety of reasons why it is easier for most people to find a job if they are university graduates with a good degree. First, a college education is certainly to meet higher-level qualifications, which is what most employers expect these days. University graduates usually get a higher salary than those without a university education. Furthermore, the job market is becoming more and more competitive, a degree is becoming a requirement to apply for a top-tier position. For example, in Vietnam, students who graduate with an engineering degree are highly paid and have an easy time getting a good job.
In conclusion, having experience and soft skills are advantageous to some extent. However, it seems to me that it is better to complete university education to be sure of success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01470588235 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96297072239 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536764705882 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5799871342 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4285714286 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1428571429 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342935947925 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112220109636 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678858615793 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213964072025 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476653854772 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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