The table below shows the percentage of the population by age groups in one town who rode bicycles in 2011

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The table below shows the percentage of the population by age groups in one town who rode bicycles in 2011.

The table compares the proportion of people in one town who cycled in 2011, broken down into five age groups: 0-9, 10-17, 18-39, 40-59, 60+.

In general, the percentage of females who rode bicycles is higher than that of males in all ages. In addition, both genders between the ages of 18 and 59 have lower percentages than other age groups.

Slightly over half of all females and males cycled in the age group 0-9. This remained high in females aged 10-17, at about 42%. However, the percentage for the males in that same age group had fallen sharply from slightly more than half to just under 25%.

There is a significant decline for male and female cyclists in the age groups 18-59. The values from these two age groups are also the lowest compared to the others. They fell to just under 20% and under 10% for males and females.

In contrast, the proportion of cyclists aged 60+ then rose significantly, especially for females. Their respective values are a bit over 18% and a bit over 13%.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, then, in addition, in contrast, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63687150838 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24522630619 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586592178771 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3266134318 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4545454545 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2727272727 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 5.23603664747 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235502117633 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892636359959 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676067441754 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131054066115 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671259785399 0.0819641961636 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.2329268293 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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