Essay topics:
Describing your best friend
Today, I will talk about my classmate, Rachel. She is twenty years old and living in Ohio, America with her family. Although she has been there a long time, she didn't know much nearby fun places. Everyday, she spends the most time for study in university and English center. In her free time, she likes reading books in bookstore also drinking milk tea with her friend. I forgot to tell you that she has been my best friend for 5 years. Sometimes, she told me that she wanted to find a better job than now. After that, I knew she is the best friend of my life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 162, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ugh she has been there a long time, she didnt know much nearby fun places. Everyday, ...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 197, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[2]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: Every day
... she didnt know much nearby fun places. Everyday, she spends the most time for study in ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 41.998997996 26% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 454.0 1615.20841683 28% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 107.0 315.596192385 34% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.24299065421 5.12529762239 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.2162214527 4.20363070211 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.03631113011 2.80592935109 73% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 176.041082164 44% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.719626168224 0.561755894193 128% => OK
syllable_count: 134.1 506.74238477 26% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 14.1460020854 49.4020404114 29% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.75 106.682146367 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.375 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 7.06120827912 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108525295232 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601434217488 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0878744161602 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108525295232 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.2 13.0946893788 40% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 50.2224549098 167% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 11.3001002004 42% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.72 12.4159519038 54% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 8.58950901804 77% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 78.4519038076 20% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.33 Out of 6
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