Some people think that large, impressive buildings are important for a city. Others believe that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals.
Discuss both these views and give your own reason
<p class="MsoNormal">Monumental city buildings are tourist attractions, and local
authorities like to spend the budget on them. However, citizens need hospitals
and schools as well. Although they are less prominent, this does not mean they
are less important. I think governments should spend money on both types of
buildings.<o:p></o:p></p><p class="MsoNormal">When you visit any city, you notice the buildings that stand
out. Some constructions such as the World Trade Center in New York or the Burj
Khalifa in Dubai or, which is the tallest building in the world, play a role in
the advertise the country. Tourists want to see these<span style="font-size: 13pt; line-height: 107%; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif;"> Skyscrapers</span> and it attracting thousands of visitors just to see this masterpiece. Furthermore, these building are act as a great
revenue generators for the government. They receive money from people who
visits this famous building by charging them. Like the Eiffel tower in France,
the Fresh government is getting such a lot of money from people who visits this
one of the world wonders</p><p class="MsoNormal">On the other sides, the government must make sure that their
people are looked after. If there are not enough schools or the school
buildings are deteriorate, children cannot be educated properly. Similarly,
society needs well-built hospitals to not be overloaded and lack of medical
infrastructures. Where I live, we have a lot of medical facilities which are
large and modern, but they cannot respond when so many are ill at the same
time. <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Overall, it is necessary for both types of buildings to
develop fly side by side. Governments should distribute capital plausibly not
only for city building because they need to convert the standpoint of the
global in their country but also they should ensure that they have sustainable
school and hospital for their citizens.<o:p></o:p></p>
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- Some people think that large, impressive buildings are important for a city. Others believe that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals.Discuss both these views and give your own reason 61
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... building in the world, play a role in the advertise the country. Tourists want to see these...
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Line 14, column 15, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'deteriorated'.
Suggestion: deteriorated
...gh schools or the school buildings are deteriorate, children cannot be educated properly. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, similarly, so, well, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.90397350993 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.8661810483 2.80592935109 173% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609271523179 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.7380779911 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.357142857 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.38176352705 525% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173054302846 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628379894252 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453181763384 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0507937655106 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416067900462 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.94 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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