Some people think that large, impressive buildings are important for city. Others believe that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is argued that in cities it is important to have large and impressive buildings, while others suggest that the focus should be put on improving schools and hospitals with public money. This essay will discuss both viewpoints and give reasons behind my opinion.
In the first place, tall and significant buildings are built downtown in every city all around the world, to represent the cities' power and wealth. Those kinds of buildings (most of the time skyscrapers) attract an incredibly large number of tourists that pay to reach the top and experience the view, but also influent companies that want to rent floors to make them their offices. All of these reasons may seem enough for everyone to think that it is important to build such big buildings, but I find myself disagreeing with this choice on how to spend public money. Construction often takes more years than it should, and more money than it was arranged, draining the budget and leaving buildings not completed. One example can be a large tower that was being built in Rome in the early 2000s, left undone and abandoned because there was not enough money.
The second point of view suggests that public money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals that, being public institutions, should be helped to offer good education and healthcare. Personally, I believe that for such important community services a larger share of the public budget should be reserved to ensure constant improvement. For example, having more money to spend could mean having more scholarships to give to those who cannot afford education or provide more supplies and cover more shifts for hospitals' personnel.
In conclusion, while it can be great to have large and impressive edifices in town to host important agencies and businesses, the most important thing is to invest on institutions like schools and hospitals that provide fundamental services for the communities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 124, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cities'' or 'city's'?
Suggestion: cities'; city's
... all around the world, to represent the cities power and wealth. Those kinds of buildi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05974842767 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62933891389 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556603773585 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.415518609 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.272727273 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9090909091 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313457402258 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112313600621 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623908017207 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1901870987 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058143590019 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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