You have borrowed something from your friend, but it was damaged. Write a letter to your friend and say
- Apologize for damaging the product
- How was it damaged?
- What will you do about it?
Dear Mat,
How have you been? It has been a long time since we last met. I am writing to inform you that the wristwatch which I borrowed from you last year has been damaged in an accident. Firstly I would like to apologize and hope that you will not be angry with me as I know that the wristwatch was a special gift from your parents.
To elucidate the incident happened while I was travelling from rapid metro toward my house and on the way, an elderly woman smashed her luggage against my wrist while boarding damaging the dial and the lug of the watch. Although the lady apologized for it, however, the damage had already been done. I immediately took the watch to the local shop where the technician advised to take the wristwatch to the service centre.
Hence I will take the wristwatch to Seiko Authorized service centre where they will replace the dial and the lug. Don’t worry I will pay for repair cost and shall return you the wristwatch as soon as I have it?
I look forward to your response and hope to get the watch fixed soon.
Best regards
Said
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mat, How have you been? It has been a long ti...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...e wristwatch to the service centre. Hence I will take the wristwatch to Seiko Aut...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...get the watch fixed soon. Best regards Said
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47208121827 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.302555081 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619289340102 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8122264216 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0909090909 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9090909091 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283331640855 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941100533216 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792092945475 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146812697803 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0929280546726 0.0580467560999 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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