Some say that sports play an important role in society. Others, however, think that it is nothing more than a leisure activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
World Cup, the most explosive football festive, undeniably cheers up the a large number of supporters all over the world every four year. Sports have been proved to entertain people in many ways, however, some people claim that a little contribution to social development is subject to the athletic activities. From my perspectives, I do believe that both social and recreational benefits are attributed to sports.
On the one hand, not only physical training but also mental development do the sports offer players. Long-lasting working hours bring people about much aggressiveness and tiredness, which requires them to resort entertainment activities so as to wind down. For instance, after various nights of burning the midnight oil for exams, male students usually excitedly take part in football matches, which either temporarily get them away from educational pressures or enhance their fitnesses. Furthermore, not only by directly participating the sports, does enjoying them through screens also induce tremendous red-letter moments between individuals. The widespread coverage of television enables most people to watch live games and share their emotions stream to others, from which mutual sharing and interaction among people are reinforced.
More importantly, social awareness of athletic merits together with community bondings are indisputable advantages of sports. Those who are greatly involved in sport activities are proved to be healthier, which is a driving factor for their relatives and friends to take up the sports as well. A society with a larger number of healthy citizens would be likely to create stronger eco
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- Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 89
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: the; a
... football festive, undeniably cheers up the a large number of supporters all over the...
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Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...tball festive, undeniably cheers up the a large number of supporters all over the world every fou...
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Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...them to resort entertainment activities so as to wind down. For instance, after various ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, so, well, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92842893033 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.692 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5637952811 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.818181818 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0589986161876 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0215893116348 0.084324248473 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0234898917327 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0422065631985 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175301086044 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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