Government money should be spent on school for children rather than professional sports and arts.do you agree or disagree?
it is a highly debatable issue weather authority of county spend money on sports for the children welfare while others argue that government should not invest money for those who played professionally and artist who performed for the public.In my opinion, I extremely disagree with that government should only spend hefty some money for school's sport event.
To begin with, sports an indispensable part of children's life but professional sports men and artists are also play a significant role in everyone's life.Firstly, ruling bodies should support by monitory to arts and sports because their events not only entertain people they also generate huge income. In addition, these events are an opportunity to showcase a Country and its talents before the world.For insurance, the London olympics 2012 by organizing the event in immaculate way, Great Britain improved its reputation.
Secondly, sports and arts are excellent platform to bring people together. They facilitate global harmony.For example, there are many sports and art exhibitions held in india as a result , the culture and tradition known to international people. They spend money on the things and host country benefited in many ways.
On the other hand, there is some truth in the argument that government should support schools so that children can take interest in such activities from an earlier age. Therefore, their physical development and other cognitive development is escalated by the time. They also learn many things like the communication skills,cooperative skills, team spirit and so on.
In conclusion, children's development is also important for government.However, it seems that government should do more towards funding the professional sports and artists.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53731343284 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04046951735 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615671641791 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.5609086892 49.4020404114 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.4 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 18.1 7.06120827912 256% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296031490262 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100195599418 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105539441527 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169306282871 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103694317847 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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