In some area of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion on this?
The young people must obey a ‘curfew’ in some parts of America, and this means they are not allowed to go outside alone after a certain time at night. In my opinion, the advantages of this regulation overweigh its drawbacks.
I think to impose the ‘curfew’ can bring three benefits. Firstly, the ‘curfew’ can ensure the safety of teenagers , because if children stay out late at night, they would become victims of crimes and accidents. Secondly, staying at home after dinner means the young students have more time to do homework and study, which has positive effects on their academic achievements. For example, my nephew who used to play outside late got higher score in his exams after he was required to stay at home during night. Finally, the limit is also a good way to prevent juvenile delinquency, since children might easily be lead to participate gang crimes if they sneak out of the house and stay with some bad people.
On the other hand, it is true that there are also some disadvantages to implement the ‘curfew’. First of all, this practice takes away the freedom and right of children to socialize, or to do part-time job, so they might lose many opportunities to learn useful skills and experience. Moreover, for some families in poor economic conditions, the ‘curfew’ may cause financial difficulties as the teenagers are unable to support their parents by doing some part-time work after school. In addition, when there is a set curfew and the parents are not at home, their children may sneak out the house without telling their parents where they are going, and this case may bring higher risk to their safety.
In conclusion, although a ‘curfew’ imposed to young people has some negative aspects, I believe that it has more positive effects on the growth of children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05537459283 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10738542119 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579804560261 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.4042895387 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.333333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5833333333 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0 7.06120827912 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365550542285 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145259336353 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825345096004 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237806675562 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609942334912 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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