In some parts of the world, there has been a restriction on the young people roaming around during certain times of the day. Many people say that teenagers should not be allowed to go out unless accompanied by elderly people. I accord with this opinion because children may not be able to protect themselves from any unknown attacks from strangers on their own.
There is a myriad of reasons why children often require supervision by the elders. Mainly, there were several occasions in the past where young people were abducted during the nights. So, security authorities strictly recommend the children to be confined to their homes during the late nights. Also, nightlife features loads of entertainment and includes activities which are inappropriate to the teenagers. For example, many young people became alcoholic from their childhood which was habituated to them in nightlife, as a result, their career was not shaped in the right direction.
Furthermore, Criminals always find night time would be the best time to grope people because of the less dense population and minimal security restrictions. It is evident that many young girls were molested by the psycho people during non-working hours. Additionally, as per the startling research, it is revealed that people are addicted to the drugs from their tender age of 13 or so. It is of paramount importance to keep children away from such negative influences.
In conclusion, it is indisputably agreed by people that today’s children are tomorrow’s policymakers. Hence, It is indispensable for parents and guardians to protect young people from any sort of negative influences and they should accompany them when they are traveling in unusual times.
- many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result.Why do many working people not get enough exercise?What can be done about this problem? 73
- Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in cinema.Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 56
- In some area of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.What is your opinion on this? 78
- some people say that is important to keep your home and workplace tidy, with everything organized and in the correct place 78
- In some area of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion on this? 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, for example, in conclusion, sort of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27272727273 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90496525633 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592727272727 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2012068055 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.571428571 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138401966961 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471934629194 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539174100819 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0926322806948 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055617021129 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.