Most people prefer to eat ready meals rather than home made food these days.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
It is thought by some that nowadays an increasing number of people choose to consume ready meals instead of home cooked food. While ready meals offer people time an budget friendly nutrition, there are also some drawbacks which should be taken into account.
Firstly, it must be admitted that the consumption of ready meals help to people safe their time and buy delicious food for reasonable price. Nowadays, people have a hectic pace of life as they have to work many hours at their offices, also they spend many hours for travelling to their jobs. As a result, people do not have enough time to cook food at home. Secondly, instead of spending time for cooking people can spend it on their families and different leisure activities. For example, they can spend it on physical activities as every person should do physical activities at least 30 minutes a day.
On the other hand, it is commonly believed that processed food is unhealthy and harmful for human’s health. Ready meals is frozen food and these food do not contain vitamins and proteins which are crucial to our health. In addition, in order to safe processed food for long time, manufacturers add there different kinds of chemicals. Another possible issue is that when people do eat home cooked food they do not gather together on the evenings to share the dinner time. Consequently, families ties become weaker and people do not have enough communication with family members as a result people can suffer from loneliness and depression.
In conclusion, fast food helps people to have more free time for different activities and helps save money, but it is also unhealthy food and the consumption of it can lead to lack of communication.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 163, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...od. While ready meals offer people time an budget friendly nutrition, there are al...
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Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this food' or 'these foods'?
Suggestion: this food; these foods
... health. Ready meals is frozen food and these food do not contain vitamins and proteins wh...
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Line 4, column 199, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f it can lead to lack of communication.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, at least, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90689655172 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59626778683 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524137931034 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2727248496 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.461538462 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9230769231 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190301532708 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849924071908 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059573615283 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129896116966 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447371560311 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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