Watching TV has been harmful effects on society.
TOPIC 6: watching tv has been harmful effects on society.
there are many controversies that whether watching tv has impacted on people or not. In my point of view, although television has its overweight advantages, it sill has effected people and even on our society deeply.
Firstly, family members no longer talk to each other due to watching television after their works. Nowadays, adults tend to let their hair down by focusing on television programmes such as comedy movies, sports, documentary films, and so on. moreover, instead of being a parent, people spend less time taking care of their children and putting them to sit in front of the television because they think the tv can help to do this task.
In addition, the more time children spend watching television, the fewer activities they do in a day effecting directly on their healthy. For example, Yi Xeng Li – a 12-year-old boy in China has been obesity and diabetes because of being a potato couch. Futhermore, studies have also shown that looking at a tv screen too much can cause sleep difficulties, lower grades, and depressed.
Last but not least, the advertisements on television often target kids who are less capable of discerning what they are watching to see the ads relating to alcohol, unhealthy foods and acquire into their minds. they will wheedle their parents to buy items on the tv and as a result, people adapting children’s requirement might be in debt. moreover, people, especially children can watch many crime or violence screens on tv programs or movies. From that, they follow the characters in that film and have violent behaviours from childhood to adulhood. For instance, there is some secondary-school girl beated their classmates because she did not respond to their questions. When asking them, they said they learned from some the movies on television.
In conclusion, watching television has many negative effected on a family and on our society that I mentioned above.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2024-07-30 | hien3112 | 73 | view |
| 2024-07-29 | Sang Sang Sang | 78 | view |
| 2024-07-11 | kevann | 61 | view |
| 2024-05-13 | Mollymaul | 67 | view |
| 2024-04-25 | Sang Sang Sang | 84 | view |
- The chart below gives information about car ownership per household in the UK from 1975 to 2005 84
- It is expected that there will be a higher proportion of older people than that of young people in many countries in the future? Do you think it is a positive or negative development? 56
- Some businesses find that new employees finishing education lack basic interpersonal ability such as working with others as a part of a team. What do you think are the causes of this problem? How to solve this problem? 73
- Watching TV has been harmful effects on society. 84
- The bar chart shows the number of cars per 1000 people in 5 countries in Europe in 2005 2009 and 2015 compared with the European average Summarise the information and make comparisons where relevant 68
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...has been harmful effects on society. there are many controversies...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...effects on society. there are many controversies that whether wat...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ople and even on our society deeply. Firstly, family members no longer talk t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ink the tv can help to do this task. In addition, the more time children spen...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ulties, lower grades, and depressed. Last but not least, the advertisements o...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 224, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...thy foods and acquire into their minds. they will wheedle their parents to buy items...
^^^^
Line 11, column 358, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...en's requirement might be in debt. moreover, people, especially children can watch ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... from some the movies on television. In conclusion, watching television has m...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10091743119 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80603995428 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623853211009 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5453371772 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.25 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275800173598 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111786725232 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.201769678459 0.0667982634062 302% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239052830674 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.283260376589 0.056905535591 498% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.