You work as part time and you are attending a course. Your manager offered you full time and asked to leave the course. Write a letter about your decision on job offer. In the letter, you should describe:
how you feel about the job
what your decision is
explain why you made the decision.
Dear Mr. David,
I am writing this letter to let you know that I am very much satisfied with my current part-time job position at your company as a Customer Service Executive. As I enrolled myself in a 3-years diploma course on Customer Service Management, I to be a part-time employee for now.
After 2 years of continuous service at your company, your offer to me to join as a full-time employee is great news for me. Unfortunately, I have to reject your offer because I am determined to complete my diploma course which will take another year.
Let me explain my reasoning behind the rejection of your offer in more detail. I have always been hungry to learn about the new processes and procedures in managing customers. For this reason, I enrolled myself in this course, and you will be happy to know that I am top of my class. After another year, I will be able to learn the process of managing customer efficiently as an expert in this field with the job experience and academic knowledge. For these reasons, I would prefer to keep my job in your company as a part-timer for now.
I look forward to hearing from you regarding my decision.
Yours faithfully,
Abed Joy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...course on Customer Service Management, I to be a part-time employee for now. ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, regarding, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64928909953 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70551780602 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549763033175 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1777039888 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1818181818 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.63636363636 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267207601331 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992822377358 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495785239806 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159765577229 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282013824587 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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