Most countries allow 18 years old people to start driving a car. Some say it is good to allow it at this age, while other people think that the age to start driving should be at least 25. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Driving is an art which excites every youth to experience during their early adulthood. In several countries they believe that during adolescent age they have enough maturity to get license and there on drive safely and responsibly, however; in other countries they believe ideal age is 25. In this essay will discuss both the view and accordingly will summarize with my opinion.
In majority of countries 18 years is considered as benchmark year for recognizing the maturity, independence and sense of responsibility of individuals for major activities, eventhough they are guided and trained by their parents or guardians on regular basis. By giving license at this age it widens the scope of part time jobs during their college days and creates the awareness of money management and helps to become self reliable. At this age people will be aware of the consequence of rash and reckless driving. Hence many countries give certain special powers after reaching adulthood such as Driving license, Power to vote etc.
On the other hand, few consider that adolescents are vulnerable and can be easily influenced by the Driving stunts and other acts performed by experts. Once individual turns 25, they will be able to recognize and imply the sensible and cautious driving. Hence minority countries believes that 25years is the best age for tagging with license as they can recognize the road and pedestrians safety.
To summarize, I believe that License should be based on the strict practical exams conducted by regulatory authorities, any individual who is above 18 should be allowed to participate and based on his/her performance license should be allotted.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, hence, however, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24626865672 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77829516728 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60447761194 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.5611500267 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.818181818 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27947686773 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970402018293 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495710529727 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15354606782 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401626540563 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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