You have been living in a rental apartment for the past year. Recently a new neighbour moved in and has been making a lot of noise, which disturbs you.
Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter:
explain the situation
describe why it bothers you
suggest a solution
Dear Mr. Rohan,
I am Rakesh Soni your tenant in apartment D15.I am writing to let you know that I am disappointed with the tenant of D13 who have moved recently.
Let me explain my situation in more details. The problem started three months ago when my new neighbor first moved in. Prior to that everything fine as old neighbor was quite considerate and helpful. The current neighbor, however stays up almost all night and play incessantly loud music. Moreover he has frequent visitors who make late night parties. Because of this I am unable to sleep properly in night and I wake up in a very lazy mood in the morning due to which I find hard to concentrate on my work in office.
Would you please transfer me or him to another apartment? I would prefer to live with someone who is supportive and considerate for others. As Iong as he is quiet and don’t make any nuisance I don’t mind to being neighbor to him.
Yours Faithfully
Rakesh Soni
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 47, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...akesh Soni your tenant in apartment D15.I am writing to let you know that I am di...
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Line 5, column 290, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
... night and play incessantly loud music. Moreover he has frequent visitors who make late ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, moreover, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 797.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63372093023 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5755420229 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674418604651 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7313327397 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.4545454545 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6363636364 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120943292813 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412009232354 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324358259526 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.079488582162 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241383606203 0.0580467560999 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.