The number of older people is increasing in many parts of the world. What are the effects of this on society as a whole? What are the advantages or disadvantages of this trend?
In recent years, due to the obvious progress in the field of medicine, the average age in the developed countries has risen dramatically. Consequently, many people are expected to live more than 80 or maybe 90 years old. In this essay I will discuss the influence of this phenomenon on the society, mentioning the merits and demerits resulting from this trend.
old people usually create a sense of coherence between the family members. To clarify, most adults tend to leave their homes after the age of 21 which leads to a fragile relationship between the siblings. Whereas, if the parents are still alive, their children will keep visiting them on a regular basis which will preserve the cohesion of the whole family.
On the one hand, grandparents can take care of their grandchildren in the absence of their parents. One salient example that demonstrates this idea is when the parents have to travel for several days for work or when they have some meetings which young children cannot attend, especially in the countries where the idea of babysitters does not exist. Therefore, the only people that the parents could trust in these moments are their mothers because they love to spend much time with those children.
On the flip side, If the elderly have good health conditions, they will occupy many job vacancies which will mitigate the youth's opportunities in the work market. Due to their high levels of experience and the ability to work for more years, they can possess all the managerial positions. Hence, it will reduce the chance for a young employee to be promoted or even to find work.
To recapitulate, not only is the senior citizens considered as the main key for maintaining a solid family, but they are also can aid their sons and daughters to raise their babies. Whilst, their ability to work for several years could deprive the youth of finding a suitable job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Old
...demerits resulting from this trend. old people usually create a sense of cohere...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, may, so, still, therefore, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89440993789 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56445027857 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586956521739 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6117034155 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.571428571 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0839667994758 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0303049802549 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525856124781 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0513173144169 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617729672053 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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