Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tells us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge.
Nowadays, various industries tend to create awareness for their goods and services. While some people believe that this advertisement influence them to purchase what they do not need, others are think that it is a way of informing them about what is available in the market. I strongly agree that advertisement make people buy what they do not need.
To start with, advertising is helpful to make people know that a company has added to their products. For example, I am a great fan of i-phones and I really don't have friends that use I-phones, so the only way I know that there is a new upgrade out there is through advertisement either on television or social media. Through this advertisement, I knew more about the various features or differences between my current phone and the new upgrade. Also, seeing advert about new products will educate people that they could either trade in their trade in any of their products for a better one or they could get a cheaper product/discount that could help them save money.
Despite all these, I still believe that advertisement is a scam that rob people or influence people to buy what they want at the time of seeing the advert but do not really need. For instance, when I tend to see the advert of i-phone 9 and the various features two weeks ago, it made me sell my i-phone 8 at a cheap price to buy i-phone 9 and I ended up finding out that apart from the shape of the two phones there is no major difference. I wouldn't have bought the phone if not for the constant advert I saw on the internet. Furthermore,there is research that when people constantly see things over and over, they develop interest in it and may end up trying it out. Advertising a product over and over tend to change the mindset of the brain about that product which will eventually lead to buying what you do not need.
To close, it is good for company to advertise their product to keep the public informed but I believe that this push people to buy what they don't need. I would suggest that people need to understand that what the purpose of an advert.
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| 2019-04-19 | estheribrahim | 67 | view |
| 2018-12-14 | scopelrafa | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, really, so, still, while, apart from, for example, for instance, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 61.0 24.0651302605 253% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52380952381 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58837255077 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481481481481 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.4527312365 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.142857143 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254024015376 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101219226275 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697475329226 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166427205075 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300993419691 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.