Traveling to study is overrated . we have brilliant scholars who studied locally. Is travel necessary for tertiary studies?
traveling is always a unique experience which enables one to explore regions and multi-cultures in a dynamic manner. Nowadays due to the effect of globalization students transcend borders to pursue higher education pretending to be global citizens.studying in abroad has its edges but i do not consider it is a necessary for tertiary studies.
First and foremost, if one has the aptitude in a particular subject under study whatever the circumstance he may face , he will eventually end up studying it out of enthusiasm wherever it may be. For instance, there are people who study being in their land and excelled in their fields.
Furthermore, with the advent of superior and supersonic communication technologies anyone can pursue from any part of the world without travelling to that place. A number of online courses are offered by universities to pupils across globe which can be accessed from any part of the world. Moreover , many big universities have collaborations with a number of local institutions where they provide their teaching strategies and teachers. one such example is Belair college in india which is affiliated with university of Illinois , chicago. students in india are able to receive the quality of education which is given at chicago without travelling over there.
In conclusion, mingling with international students is a special experience for one to grow individually , however this is not a necessary for one to transit borders to pursue higher education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 237.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3417721519 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17582203994 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62447257384 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.144408676 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.6 104.977214359 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.25397266985 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.33497536946 337% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21391898068 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732432313703 0.0925447433944 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583521095935 0.071462118173 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123701562231 0.151781067708 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642019565045 0.0609392437508 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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