Popular events like the Football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tension and releasing patriotic emotion in a safe way.
Since history, the conflicts among some nations are going on. Earlier they used to fight against each other in battle fields and wars, but from last few decades some of the International Sporting events are being organized for which it is believed that such events helps in relieving the international tension and releasing patriotism in a secure way. I agree the given statement to the great extent bus as every coin has two sides, there are also some negative effects of this.
On one hand, such events provides a platform to the athletes to show their talent and release patriotism in a safe way against their enemy country. Every four year when The Olympics are organised people get get engaged in supporting their country and showing their love towards their nation. They wear the t-shirts of their team, buy national flags, paints the walls of the streets using their national colours and sit together sidelining their internal conflicts and issues.The criminal activities are also dropped down as everyone in busy in supporting their teams rather than rivals.Even the leaders of the countries get a chance to sit together and solve their internal issues.
On the other hand, these events can also have many adverse effects like sometimes getting defeated by other country can would increase the jealousy and anger which would further lead to a fight between them. Some athletes with a short temperament can get into a fight with their competitors which can lead to animosity between two nations. Along with this, in some countries the craze of gambling increases enormously during such events and specially during the Cricket World Cup which disturbs the international relations of the nation and also can affect the financial condition of the nation.
In conclusion, sporting occasions can be proved helpful in decreasing the international conflicts and issues in a great way but there are some negative effects which could be tried to diminish.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11526479751 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54128095812 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554517133956 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.5720155456 49.4020404114 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.2 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.1 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199838884035 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798374893433 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859460208194 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127772249794 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045821742704 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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