write about your dream house
It will be great happiness for everyone if we can own a house designed by ourselves. A house in my dream is not necessarily a large house but I want my house to be close to nature. A house located on the outskirts of town will be very suitable for me to enjoy a simple life. I want a small waterfall near my house surround by trees. I like having breakfast or enjoy night views in my own garden. Simplicity is beauty, this explains why I would prefer an airy space rather than a well-equipped house. However, the house should have basic necessities in the kitchen to serve all my demands in daily life. my bedroom will be more perfect if it has a library of books. That I have already read and could look out of the window to see the scenery. Moreover, in my house, I wish to have a beautiful field where I could go for jogging or play some games with my friend. I hope my dream house will get built so that my friend, my teachers and most of all my family can come and enjoy it with me.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 532, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...d house. However, the house should have basic necessities in the kitchen to serve all my demands ...
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Line 1, column 604, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
... to serve all my demands in daily life. my bedroom will be more perfect if it has ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 5.60731707317 535% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 794.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.09278350515 4.92477711251 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37070816436 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59793814433 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 1.53170731707 588% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.8416540408 43.030603864 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.1818181818 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132752945267 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583664037408 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738360770026 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132752945267 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 13.2329268293 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.15 11.4140731707 54% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.51 8.06136585366 81% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.