Describing Process of Making Chewing Gum
The figures present the simple mechanism about how chewing gum is produced. Process of this making contain of three steps before it is eatable; melting, mixing, shaping, and also packaging.
Firstly, the pieces of ingredient, contain of rubber, put onto a high temperatures drum until the figure shaped into single mass. Then, this shape strained until all of the fluid eliminating and the immediately ready to proceed.
Secondly, lack of moisture rubber is moved into another container and blend with another additional. There are flavorings, softeners, and also sweeteners added. The mixture then sheeted to roller machine and shaped slightly turn out to be sheets. Sheets of gums is grouped based on each flavor before it slice.
Afterward, sheet of gums are cut onto four-sided figure then fragmented into pieces.
Finally, the gum is ensuing to package. Even though all of the procedure was automatically machined, packaging should be doing by human. This process needs carefulness to surround each of gum well. In the last, chewing gum later on ready to distribute and blowing for reduce your stress.
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Sentence: There are flavorings, softeners, and also sweeteners added.
Description: The fragment and also sweeteners is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace also with adjective
Sentence: In the last, chewing gum later on ready to distribute and blowing for reduce your stress.
In the last, chewing gum later on is ready to distribute and blowing for reducing your stress.
Sentence: Process of this making contain of three steps before it is eatable; melting, mixing, shaping, and also packaging.
Sentence: Process of this making contains of three steps before it is eatable; melting, mixing, shaping, and also packaging.
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