Essay topics:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?One of the best ways that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part-time job.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Without a shadow af the doubt, preparing for adult life and having a good job play a vital role in the community progress and development. By preparing for future we can be experts in our field and having exert people in essential for countries. Many people contend that one of the best ways for preparing children for adult life is providing a part time job for them, while others assert that it is not necessary. Both of the opposing arguments appear to be somewhat convincing and stand to point. However, my personal experience and actual observation of life have led me to agree that havin a part time job is very helpful for children. In the ensuing paragraphs, I delve into many reasons to substantiate my point.
The first and possibly the paramount consequential reason is that having a role in daily life makes children smarter. For example, when I was a teenager I had a job in a bookstore. This job was very challanging for me because I have to manage my time for doing my school's homework and also doing my daily tasks in the library. Finally, I found a very smart way for managing my time in a suitable way. I think, people in challenging situation must think for doing their roles better and it makes them smarter. As you can see, having a job is helpful.
Another point springing to mind is that by experiencing fifferent works is a useful way for finding the interest. In my opinion by being among the varios jobs we can choose our future career. For instance, my brother had a part time job when he was in high scholl. He worked in a drug store and he met a lot of patients and medicins. After that, he decided to be a medicine, and now he is. As a result, parent must persuade their children to take part time jobs.
Altough all the reasons are the first ones cross to the mind, they are not the only reasons possible. There is another subject which must be considered. A noteworthy statics revealed by a recent study conducted on parents who help their children to take part time jobs. the study demostrates that children that participate in jobs are more responsible in comparision with other kids. This investigation was done among families from different countries to avoid any bias.
To sum it all up, bytaking all the details into consideration parents can help their children to take part time jobs and having a good job is a suitable way for finding their interest, choosing their career, beeing smart and aslo being responsible. I hope so, one day all the children can fullfil their wishes by preparing for adult life and having good jobs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: part-time
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2111.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 460.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58913043478 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60210308283 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482608695652 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 662.4 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.357232384 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.44 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.32 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361175225477 0.236089414692 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101533669267 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791743548858 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211706187305 0.150856017488 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560020022273 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.