Movies and television strongly influence the way people behave?” Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
At this age of technology, the world is integrated and we are connected to each other by any means. Movies and television are the innovation of modern technology and these play an important role on our daily life. It has pervasive influence on us. Some people believe that movies and televisions have greater influence on our behavior. Other opposes. In my view, movies and televisions have pervasive effect on the way, people behave and these effects are long lasting. I possess this view for two important reasons, which I will elaborate in the following essay.
The main reason is that the central characters of movies and cinemas have so strong personality that we all especially, the young generations want to imitate these characters. They select their role models from these central character. The school & college wants to wear the dresses like their hero, they want to be like their role model. For example, when I was a college student, I used to watch Bollywood movie. The famous actor Shaharukh Khan was my role model and I always tried to copy my favorite hero in every aspect of my life. I used to wear dresses like him, I used to wear glasses like him. As you can see, my role model had a greater influence on my life and it lasted for a long time.
Another reason is that human beings have the tendency to imitate other's culture. Nowadays of satellite TV, we can watch and enjoy the movies, drama, serials of other country at any time. These movies, cinemas contain the information about the cultures, norms, rituals of that respective country, in which it is produced. Then we want to celebrate these events in our country. For instance, hallowen, a western culture is now celebrated all over the world. The people from different parts celebrate cherry blossom festival, which is a local culture of Japan. All these happening only because of media and satellite television. This experiences show how powerful the effect of media and satellite television on people's life.
In some, I believe that movies and television affect our life greatly and these effects are so pervasive that we can't deny. Not only movies and satellite televisions influences individual people but also it changes the society as a whole both positively and negatively. We all should aware of using the media and television and try to use these for constructive purposes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 114, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... these effects are so pervasive that we cant deny. Not only movies and satellite tel...
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Line 4, column 372, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to use these for constructive purposes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, for example, for instance, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1963.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88308457711 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60323667478 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509950248756 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 647.1 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9643577887 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7916666667 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58333333333 5.45110844103 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1835404964 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525712067415 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611870129976 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125077060661 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063969647487 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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