Popular events like the Football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tension and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.
Nowadays, the rapid and different development among countries in the world lead to the gap between rich and poor nation. It is the root cause of international controversy and the reason for the potential war, especially internal civil war. The formation of international sporting events would help to change present situation by creating more interaction and relationship among countries in the world. These positive activities would provide a friendly environment for the fairly competition and promote the cultural exchange. Such occasions like Olympics Games of Football World Cup bring nation together by easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in safe way.
Millennia had proved an undeniable fact that international sporting events are the great way to reduce disputes among countries, release the negative emotions through sporting games and gather people together, living under a roof. The ancient history showed that the Greeks and the Romans was willing to interrupt battles and participated in the sporting events. The winning team felt very happy and share their victory with each other by shake losing team's hand and embrace them. The country which gain victory do not only proud of their success but also prove that victory could get by other ways. This is a great evidence to persuade leaders to try to reach agreement to end their dispute and line peacefully.
International sporting events like football world cup is a strongly statement which represent for those developing countries as Brazilian could proud of their nation. While Brazil is known as unemployment and lack of education country, many Brazil's citizen always feel disappointed about their disadvantages, this is a source of a low self-esteem and create the internal civil crisis. But Olympics Games has converted the situation by showing the excellent football squad to the world. Brazil football team is well-known for their talent. When the victory comes and Brazil's citizen proud of their nation, this occasion bring families and neighbors together and make those viral gangs celebrate peacefully.
In conclusion, international sporting event in general and friendly programs are the chances to make those individuals closely and bring liberating patriotic feelings.
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- NGUYEN VO KHA DUYEN - MOTIVATION LETTER 70
- Popular events like the Football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tension and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. 84
- As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 482, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ake losing teams hand and embrace them. The country which gain victory do not only ...
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Line 5, column 58, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('strongly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('statement') instead of another adjective.
...rting events like football world cup is a strongly statement which represent for those developing co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, while, in conclusion, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1934.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52571428571 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80075208558 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7097763984 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.875 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5625 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362604634469 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109781876673 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13593861553 0.0667982634062 204% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210618977314 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0986196196303 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.