Compare and contrast that the way of life with that of your parents. Which way of life do you think would be more satisfying to future generations?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Everything changes with the lapse of the time. The way which you live yesterday is not same which you are in today and will not be same in tomorrow. Because of the passes of the generation,the way of life which our ancesstors–especially parents, used to live is different which we do today. Definitely we are all human beings, some thing is same whether the time elapsed or not. In my view some way of life is necessary to revise from our ancesstors and we would be capable to make the fusion with between modern world for the betterment of future. First of all, our parents normally depend on the agriculture. All the family members engage in the farming and they are more or less dependen in the agriculture. But most of the young generations like myself in my country doesnot usually want to engage in that. They are interested in morden world like technology job, governmental officials and other civil servant sectors. Furthermore, our parents use to stay at home and want to spend whole life with the family. They rarely go to visit abroad, since people does not have enough money and even if they have, they want to transfer to their offsprings. They are worried about their children future. But we love to explore ourselves and learn the different culture around the world. I have travelled many countries even in this age. My parents want to celebrate different kind of Hindu culture very purely and they do not know more about the foreign culture. They are highly conscious about our religious values and norms but I do not know exactly how to celebrate even our biggest festival 'Dashain'. At last in my opinion there are many different impact on moden life because of the technology and globalization. We have to improve ourselvles and we have to preserve our culture and values too. The future generation would be more satisfying if they are able to make fusion between our traditional knowledge with modern tecnology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, kind of, first of all, in my opinion, in my view, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 335.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7671641791 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72075428851 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516417910448 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6422955743 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0526315789 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6315789474 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198024590541 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575887169113 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726044379254 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198024590541 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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