Many people believe that economic development is necessary for a country’s success. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such approach?
Nowadays, people have variety view about how countries should measure their progress. While, economic advanced is indispensable part of society’s improvement, but I also believe that other measure of development share equal important just as this. Therefore, there are both pros and cons about this issue that we will argue in this essay.
Indeed, there are some key reasons why economic growth is seen as a fundamental goal for countries. First of all, the most rational argument in favor of this assertion is that economic development unfolds possibility to have a high level of living standards for people. In addition, economic progress ensure that more money is available for all of strata of society. So, followed by this the poverty is eliminated. Moreover, a healthy economic result in job creation, a high level of employment and the better income for all of people. Finally, a strong economy can help a country’s state on global stage, in terms of its trading power and the political situation.
Despite those said advantages, I believe that the downside of the economic development on the social behavior is more worrying. In the point of my view, the community values like the customs, habits and moral will be disappeared. For instance, in the development countries with the powerful economy, the sense of help and support can be vanished due to many things for all people.
In conclusion, the key role of economic in the country is clear and we know that the economy improvement advantages will have significant positive effects on the societies. But we must keep in mind that social, environmental and health criteria are equally considerable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17647058824 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91279504943 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599264705882 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5005030145 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.571428571 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247073780042 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736994720473 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532410281135 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135188231578 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376954672837 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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