Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent else where
To what extent do you agree with this view?
numerous individuals assume that the authority should not waste money on the arts, this is supposed to be spent to other aspects. In accordance with this statement, this essay will explain both points of view and also put forward my perspective in the following paragraphs.
In regard to the argument above, I do appreciate to the assumption which believed that the government have to not spend money on the arts fields. Nevertheless, I tend to think that all efforts that were created by bureaucrat are going to produce an excellent outcome since I knew that everything that they have done are the best decision to be made. Therefore, I do personally agree to spend the country budget equally to every aspect which that nation had.
According to my perspective, mixing these arguments are the most fruitful ways to obtain numerous positive impacts. regarding to the positive influences, it, first and foremost, is going to render the equal enhancement of every sector in that country. Thereby, that nation are capable of obtaining other countless excellent influences. Second but not less crucial, it is apparent that the state, furthermore, will acquire a positive image in global view because they had a great development in all aspects. Afterwards, this positive image, additionally, is going to attract more holidaymakers to come to that nation, which is in the end will provide a benefit to their economy sector.
By way of conclusion, it seems to me that mixing these two aspects are the best decision to be created since it is able to bestow various beneficial impacts to the country. Thus, in order to produce more benefits and fewer drawbacks, we, as a part of the citizen, have to support all the policies and the efforts that have been made by our bureaucrat.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, nevertheless, regarding, second, so, therefore, thus, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98322147651 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78285051978 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563758389262 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3603015907 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.75 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175296553487 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597987551865 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713379637986 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110585677564 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0985273578454 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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