You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
- say why he/she would not enjoy going to college
- explain why getting a job is good idea for him/her
- suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear joy,
I received your letter two days back and glad to see that you achieved a good rank in your high school studies and now you are seeking guidance for your next move towards a job or further education by attending a college. I would love to guide you on this matter. In regards to your question, I'll advise you to try to get a job first rather than going for college to do further studies. The most prominent reason behind this is that if you enroll yourself for college studies you will get only theoretical knowledge; therefore, some times it may not be helpful to step up your career and it remains as useless and waste of time.
In current time, getting hired is not a piece of cake and it may take time, proper efforts and practical skills. In other words, getting a job and getting
educational degrees are way different and as per your current education and age it will be perfect to get a job which will give you a practical knowledge
and experience which will boost up your knowledge, attitude, and skills drastically.
Now if I suggest you about the type of jobs you should go for rather than first priority should be relevant to your field and for that, you should try for Junior level account assistant either Admin executive or go for Human Resource executive. Needless to say that you can able to crack interviews for these fields
as you have gathered educational degrees related to this.
I hope after reading this letter you are assured to go for Career option over college studies. I'll be happy to hear your thoughts on this as well as any queries.
Your's faithfully,
Anky
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: Regarding; With regard to
...would love to guide you on this matter. In regards to your question, Ill advise you to try to...
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Line 3, column 294, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...is matter. In regards to your question, Ill advise you to try to get a job first ra...
^^^
Line 12, column 96, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...for Career option over college studies. Ill be happy to hear your thoughts on this ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, therefore, well, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 5.05154639175 277% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 937.175257732 142% => OK
No of words: 289.0 206.0 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6124567474 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4011447484 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56401384083 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 407.7 290.88556701 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.4020966994 44.8134815571 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.181818182 76.5299724578 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2727272727 16.8248392259 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33438496882 0.216113520407 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129125539581 0.0766984524023 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908051977179 0.0603063233224 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14456480206 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0969573656268 0.0580467560999 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 8.37731958763 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 70.7449484536 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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