Some people think that tourism benefits the host country. Others think that tourism causes problems for the host country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is widely known that tourism can positively impact on countries’ economy. Even though it has become one of the main incomes among the poorest areas of the globe, opponents argue that the host country might be endangered by the effects of tourism. This essay aims to look into both sides of the argument and reach a logical conclusion.
On one side, supporters of tourism report that it results in several benefits for both the travellers and the host country. Generally, willingness to allow themselves some comforts is a common feature in tourists who might need several facilities during their journey: restaurants, hotels and pools could easily forecast an increasing income that may help the general economy of the country. Furthermore, both travellers and host population can benefit from this encounter by learning each other’s different cultures and habits.
On the other side, those whom critic tourism suggests that disadvantages outweigh advantages. In detail, they suggest that globalized-tourism should be discouraged for the enormous damage it could cause in the long-term: tourists’ mass arrivals could irremediably damage historical monuments and buildings whose expensive makeover is generally unaffordable for poor countries. Examples can be seen in low-budget travellers or backpackers that, usually preferring self-organized tours and avoiding comfortable accommodation, don’t provide the host country with a high income.
In conclusion, considering the possible negative effects that may impact on the architectural structure of buildings and monuments whose inestimable historical and religious values represent a good for the society worldwide, mass arrivals should be restrained by proposing a more sustainable type of tourism.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, may, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.83908045977 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22227916907 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63601532567 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.6007965647 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.4 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224054323025 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921053527264 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733566891427 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125703584406 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638207782037 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.89 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.67 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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