In recent times, many people are making the decision to live alone.
What are the causes of this?
Does it have positive or negatives effects on society?
Many people are preferring to stay alone in the contemporary era, this is happening because of restrictions at home and to do their dream job, it has been a negative effect on society.
There are many compelling reasons for the said trend, the primary cause is not having enough freedom at home which encouraging citizens to separate from family and live single. The secondary cause is to full fill their interested job, humans tend to travel to other countries or states where they can stay individually. For example, in the U.S.A. adults interested to enjoy their life as a single without any conditions from their family.
This creates a negative impact on society where individuals can easily make mistakes such as addiction to drugs and violating the law. Staying alone creates more anxiety which creates more health issues, due to this government has to invest in individuals to overcome these issues. These persons create hypothetical issues in public places where human beings get panic. For example, The Outlook, a magazine, conducted a survey recently which proven the individuals who staying alone violating law frequently. In addition, providing security to each person is a high risk for the government.
In Conclusion, I reiterate that several citizens are interesting to stay alone, which is causing due to over rules at home as well as to do their interested job people traveling to different locations. As a result, this is impacting on society negatively where humans tend to make their mistakes. This can be overcome by educating men and women.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
Many people are preferring to stay alone in the contemporary era, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, second, so, well, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12062256809 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75002322646 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591439688716 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7387287068 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.666666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187683162995 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669071143985 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614907266667 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120538805725 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418319261101 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.