Do you agree or disagree?
The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.
The developing of society requires variety of rules, guaranteeing the regular cycle of both daily life of ordinary people or policy of government. Regulations are inevitable. When the society make rules, it always adapts to variety of people, especially according to their states, occupations and growth environment. So can we just say these rules are too strict for every single youngster? Personally, I will strongly oppose this opinion, instead, there are several aspects in which the rules must be obeyed.
First, moral rules should be the essential one that young people can't go against, since they are the bottom lines which can reflect the light of human nature. Moreover, in some particular situations, moral rules are easily to complied with. For instance, when people encounter with someone who have injured in an accident, it should be grateful to give a hand to this unfortunate man, instead of just standing there, looking at him suffering in pain. Though this is nearly most difficult moral problem as for youngsters nowadays, in fact, young people are more easily to respond to this situation than other people, since they have more energy and strength to deal with it. Additionally, there are also more moral rules which apply to daily life and more easily to obey, such as avoiding hurting others feelings, being friendly to strangers and so on. There is no doubt that there will be the same treatment in turn when in troubles, if there is more respect to the moral rules.
Second, laws are another kind of rules which young people must be obedient to. Laws are not strict because they suit with the whole people in society. People are protected by laws and regulations in every aspects of life, which are the most fundamental rules. If there's no laws, the world will be in a huge mass. For example, young people shouldn't violate others in the rights of speaking, safety, and freedom. If they do so, their rights will be protected either. Only if living in laws, people can survive successfully. So never challenge the laws and also, never think them of something too strict.
In nutshell, moral rules and laws support the society to run regularly, and make us live on the square. As for youngsters, the most basic and important rules are ones that most easily to obey, which are never be too strict to follow.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 65, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... be the essential one that young people cant go against, since they are the bottom l...
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Line 5, column 264, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
...hich are the most fundamental rules. If theres no laws, the world will be in a huge ma...
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Line 5, column 340, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
... a huge mass. For example, young people shouldnt violate others in the rights of speakin...
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Line 7, column 210, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...at most easily to obey, which are never be too strict to follow.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, second, so, as for, for example, for instance, in fact, kind of, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1937.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89141414141 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46457789895 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525252525253 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7820919388 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2380952381 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213496886578 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651858371741 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460020735923 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148563515521 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419938001056 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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