culture shock is a new worrying concern for few immigrate. What are the possible options to eradicate this issue
Culture shock happens when some people moved into another place and had a different experience of cultural. It a big issue for any immigrant newbie to deal with a new lifestyle. It seems a small problem, but it could cause any psychological issue. Therefore, we must take steps to eradicate it.
Firstly, efforts need to be taken by both sides to help complete new arrive immigrant into the local culture. For instance, learning the local language, learning about food culture, custom and law. In addition, the receiving country should pay more patience while the newly arrived going through this process.
Secondly, it is important to respect the new culture of diversity. In brief, to accept the difference and acknowledge between two parties can make the combination becomes easy. Thus, kept respect between natives and immigrant must be maintained.
All in all, the best way to solve the culture shock is learning the culture before moving. By acknowledging difference culture diversity respect and patience, it can help most people to avoid culture shock. Hence, every small step can be beneficial for ethnic fusion and protect against cultural shock problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in brief
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 994.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 188.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28723404255 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63351058458 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664893617021 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.7312797762 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.4615384615 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4615384615 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204478270431 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670352657053 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511763874876 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110367575816 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545431697253 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.81 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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