Is medical technology a curse or a blessing?
Times are changing rapidly and so are the long-held beliefs of modern man. A recent controversy that has further flared up among the elites and intellectuals of all nations is whether medical technology a curse or a blessing. Personally, I prefer to keep up a mixed stance on this issue.
To begin with, it must be acknowledged that medical technology is blessed for us. Most of the doctors recently using technology for curing the disease. For example, cancer, and HIV in these times curable because of technology and people can live a long life. These reasons shed enough light on the significance of medical technology is blessed.
However, the above discussed convincing argument, I feel compelled to consider that strong role of medical technology in our life. If people for long-lasting its burden on families and more expenses, such as long day care, medicines, etc.
A recent survey conducted by Cambridge University confirmed that 25% a most.
This evidence declares loud and clear that medical technology important of our life can't be overlooked.
It indeed goes without saying that health is predominant of life, but dominance influence of the relationship between families or extra expenses should not be ignored at any cost.
Every cloud has a silver lining likewise, best technology, color x-rays, they offer Is worth going for
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, likewise, look, so, for example, i feel, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1131.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 219.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16438356164 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82825757091 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675799086758 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8379561018 50.4703680194 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8461538462 20.9669160288 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.12807881773 170% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312831731456 0.242375264174 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0997301515134 0.0925447433944 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110258230889 0.071462118173 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107198304909 0.151781067708 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108310502586 0.0609392437508 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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