On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover of anything lost.
Write a letter to the manager of Insurance company
Describe the item you lost
Explain how you lost it
Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.
Dear Sir,
I am writing in reference to inform you about the loss of a valuable item while in transit. Let me explain the incident in detail.
To elucidate I was travelling from Sydney to Perth when I lost my expensive iPhone X which I had recently purchased from an Apple retail store in Sydney. The cell phone was dark grey in colour with metallic white cover. Additionally, my name was engraved on the flip side of the phone which provided it with a distinct look. Although I can't remember when exactly I lost the phone as I was travelling in a crowded bus however I believe someone may have stolen it as such incident has happened before with some of the fellow passengers on the same route. For your information, I have lodged a complaint with the local police station and the case number is 345XRT.
Since my phone was covered with apple care insurance which covers the phone against theft, therefore, I would request you to provide a free replacement of my phone. Lastly, my stolen phones IMEA number is 4567DRBHBCB7, the IMEA number may help you to investigate the case in detail.
looking forward to receiving a free replacement of the phone as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely
Saud
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing in reference to inform you ...
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Line 4, column 337, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ded it with a distinct look. Although I cant remember when exactly I lost the phone ...
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Line 4, column 505, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... such incident has happened before with some of the fellow passengers on the same route. Fo...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Looking
...ou to investigate the case in detail. looking forward to receiving a free replacemen...
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Line 7, column 31, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...detail. looking forward to receiving a free replacement of the phone as soon as...
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Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e as soon as possible. Yours sincerely Saud
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, lastly, look, may, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 5.60731707317 410% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68396226415 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61932649865 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599056603774 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.8103340648 43.030603864 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2727272727 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167593291806 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525270770828 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522051544483 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939881449681 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615195642758 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.