'The two maps below show the changes in the town of Denham from 1986 to the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main change'
The maps elucidate the alterations in Denham’s Town between 1986 and Present time. At first glance, it is evident that the most noticeable changes occurred in the number of decreasing farmland in this town.
To begin with, it is apparent that there were countless changes in the amount of housing in the town. These days, numerous new houses had been constructed starting from the south of part of Denham, running alongside the main road to the north part of the town, In which it altered the position of various farmland areas in 1986. Furthermore, there was a new retirement home that was built in the middle of the town, specifically it had replaced the position of garden in previous time and just opposite a new square road.
In accordance with other changes, the position of the shops in 1986 had been altered by a new road new houses. Moreover, to the opposite of the post office, the size of primary school had been expanded into a bigger building in present time.
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- Bar chart : the percentage of boys, girls and all for chatting on the internet and playing on games console. 78
- The line chart : Japanese tourists travelling abroad.The bar chart : Australia’s share of Japan’s tourist market. 78
- The graph below shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007. 84
- Space exploration requires vast sums of money. Is the amount of money spent on space research justifiable? Could the money be better spent?What is your viewpoint on this issue? Give reasons for your answer. 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 813.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75438596491 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56309858729 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561403508772 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3613982143 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.142857143 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 5.23603664747 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16159463707 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842524635156 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600304259634 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119293768368 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676893803965 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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